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Friday, March 26, 2021
dogs should not be able to go transport on vehicles
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I liked that you labelled everything but next time put more description. and
ReplyDeleteremember to put a question at the end. thanks and keep up the good work!!
Hi Zander, I am Ahlia form the Toroa hub. I really liked how you labelled everything and how you made it very clear. Your post reminded me when I did something similar when I was is korimako. Maybe next time you could add more reasons about why dogs shouldn't be allowed on trasport.
ReplyDeleteHey Zander, great blog post! I like the way that you have explained how you created this post. Next time remember to check through your post for capital letters. Keep up the awesome work sharing your learning!
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